All Comments on 'Who Do You Belong To?'

Lame. Blatantly consensual relationship, and there's not even a suggestion that she's really reluctant, just bitchy. The "escape" was such obvious bullshit, because she could easily have tipped off the staff at any point, and "intimidating" or not, intimidation doesn't get you past a 911 call.

A "complicated" relationship with roleplay may include rough angry sex but that doesn't make it non-con or reluctance.

i enjoyed your first story for this site. don't let others tell you it doesn't fit the category. i saw the reluctance and lack of consent. very good read. i encourage you to write more.

Really liked this!!! I agree ignore the commenter claiming this was consensual. Perhaps that reader doesn't understand this category and all the types of non-consensual sex there is.

I agree this was a great read keep them coming.

I agree, it wasn't as strong as some other non-consensual stuff I've read. But it was definitely. The turning point for non-consent, was where he pulled open her lips, and she wasn't wet.

THE END

P.S. Some things bothered me, in one paragraph you called him 'Jo' but before that 'Joe', and several times you put 'breathe' instead of 'breath'

Hope it helps

Everyone is entitled to their own opinion... Honestly, everyone has different sexual tastes. For me, this was perfect. I really loved it! And I'm glad you posted it, don't be discouraged by everyone else. Could be, they just don't have the same tastes as we.

Really loved it! Read it multiple times!

By far one if my favorite stories. Can read it again and again!

Don't listen to negative comments, this story was great! Keep up the great writing! Would love to read more from you.

You have to continue

hot under jealous sex or anger sex

no lube anal is certainly hot only if its fantasy

in real life laura might end up in some emergency ward

i appreciate his jealousluy and possessiveness despite the fact that he was the one to left her

and he might leave her again once gets bored with her ass to and might cheat on her too

i wonder if aggressive guys like joe are really worth it as he might do the same assault on other girls too other than laura

but still he was patient with her only if he had some lube and had dilate her ass more