by OrdinaryGirl
Shaping up to be a lovely and well told tale. The key to any serial is to want 'em panting for the next episode.
Ch. 2 (my first glimpse of your talent) does precisicely that!
Well done.
Will, at my leisure peruse your previous writings. May even tempt myself by reading Ch. 1 tonight. I do so hope you don't mind me being out of order!
Very nicely done OG. This second installment was superb. I really wasn't sure where you were headed with it, but where it ended up was excellent. You'll have to hurry and get the next chapter out quickly, but be sure to take your time and slowly build up the tension. Your best stories are those that unfold slowly, yet are sizzling the entire time. I'm sure there's more people here than me eagerly awaiting more stories from you. Also, your new picture looks fantastic. It takes years off an already youthful woman ;)
Now, more business to attend to in my pants.