by LitteraryWench
Thank you for the feedback so far. Except for a couple of things, which were formatting errors, your feedback was helpful! I have this story up at my website as well, so I will fix the issues mentioned.
To the member who commented on the spelling of my handle. I know. I did it on purpose. :)
Nothing like anything else I've read on this site, and there aren't many stories about which I can say that. Well done!