All Comments on 'Why TS Gurls are Better'

Great story.

I normally love this type of story, but your spelling and grammatical errors make me realize that you probably never even graduated from high school. Don't even try to say that they are only typos. A typo is when a writer slips on a key. Usually, a type does not change the meaning. Your crappy writing just makes me think how much of an idiot you really are.

Get an editor to go through your story before you publish it.

At this moment, my feeling is that this is pure crap. If you can't do better than this, then stop writing..

Good try. The spelling and grammar does detract, but there are some well structure sentences that make up for it.

‘I soon stated falling asleep, but would never get there.’

All been there and done that.

Try to have some one else read your work, I write for a living and would never dream of publishing something with out a competent proof reader.

I like yourself am no grammer expert, nor do i read porn stories for the grammer.. I read them to get arroused, and your story did that!! the others who only post negative comments should fuck off!! Very nice, hope to see more!! :)

sure wish more guys were as direct as you when meeting a Gurl-

Janedon---London Ontario

Good story but next time clean up your spelling errors

Very hot story. Short but sweet. Only once has a transgendered girl picked me up like that. I have had my share of transgendered girls over the years and I loved it each time. All but one time with a t-girl I was the bottom and that’s how I like it.