by hisangelbeauty
It sounds very much like the author has well researched the subject and/or has first hand experience of the lifestyle. Beautifully written. More please..
Some really good lines in this story. The author has imbued the action in the story with a raw sense of reality and clearly knows her genre.
If you like BDSM you will like this.
Another great story, the author has flexed their mighty writing ability with this account of kinky sex involving BDSM. Although I am not into the lifestyle perhaps due to sheer inexperience or lack of curiosity or exploration and initiative. I enjoyed your story in spite of its content or subject matter but the extent of your writing ability in capturing the nuance and emotion of the characters. You exhibit genius in skills that are revered by me as a reader. This is the last of the stories on this site that I had the sheer joyful experience to enjoy! I hope I don't sound to patronizing but you do posses a talent that is rare and incredible. I hope you write more since a talent of this scope and dimension should be shared. I hope you accept the information in the spirit it was given. Finally, thank you and keep on writing and good luck and may you find comfort in love always. Your fan Phil
As a masochist can I just say.. yum! This was amazing! His love for her is so obvious, as is the fact that he knows he must be in control of her and that she needs him to be strict sometimes. Wow. Absolutely perfect!