by wifelvrman
this story gone beyond the common sense of belief.it right at stupidity.writer don't have a clue.
Let her make sure and infect all involved. Then a ritual Hari Kari is preferred. Oh make sure the bowel removal is complete! Were I a relative to either of these, all involved would be terminated mysteriously.
Nothing new is happening. Please have the boss and co-workers killed and then the husband and wife commit suicide and end this story.
i like how the story is progressing, but the wife seemed to be accepting it all to easily. Instead of labelling everybody as opportunists you could also provide additional background on the other characters
If you are going to add gay activities put it in the gay section...the mm really puts one off like in ch.4
Try to remove all references to scat & urination will ya & enough of the fucking strangers for money...Make her do the boss & other office members...plus the stories arent much detailed..It started out quite promising...but you fucked it up a bit...Like to see more chapters though..
I just love this situation. I love how Deborah and George do what ever it takes to keep him out of jail and this whole thing a secret. Keep them coming and ignore all the negative comments. You are doing a great job!!!
I have never sucked a man's cock before . Now I am looking forward to it