All Comments on 'Wild Waterpark Fieldtrip Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I wish I'd had a teacher like that!

Amazingly sexy story. I'd love to see a longer scene... I know they're highschoolers and all, but I'll bet with more of them, they can last a little longer. ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More!

More please! Great story. How 'bout Ms. Centeno and the girls having some fun--looks like Holly'd be game and Maddie would join in...

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxover 10 years ago
WHAT THE FUCK:

you've stopped this series - - - which was above&beyond awesome

that needed lots more done around that had millions possibilities ...........

you've stop write stories over1yearnow [ thennnnnnnnnnnn ] finally return

write something that does absolutely nothing ..................... huhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxover 10 years ago
i've didn't actually:

read the new story b4i'vemade previous comment ...... I've just looked over

the comments people made ........... I've did now read good deal not all -

it's better from what people complaining & it needs actually continue THIS TIME

more details along with being longer ....................... even though it's been

over1yearnow you've need actually continue this series since you've back writer

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Almost New Year & almost time for a new chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
MORE, please!!!

I agree w/the previous annamous comment. You just can't leave us hanging like that. How long before we can exect another chapter? As I said already, you just can't leave us dangling as you seem to have done!!! To quote Charles Dickins, "More please, Sir. I want more!!!". YOMEYO

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Its time for more teacher pupil fun.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
To be continued?

Hope you keep this going. Maybe some girl on girl, DP, DVDA, orgy

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

This teacher NEEDS to have more FUN!

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