All Comments on 'Wilder Gods Ch. 02'

Two easily-confused words pop out: "ecstasy" and " shuddering". Otherwise, your solid writing skills are obvious.

Apart from a few errors, this proves a good read. My only frustration is that it's so short!! Your instalments are as teasing and frustrating as the princess's oral techniques ;) next time, satisfy your readers more and provide lots and lots of pages! :)