All Comments on 'Will He Look? Will He See?'

by lordchilworth

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BriteaseBriteaseover 15 years ago
well, yes

Very different.

Not what I expected at the end, and very well written

Ta

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Continue

Loved it, would have given it 75 but it is a bit short. Please carry on, why not make it a series. here's hoping.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Excellent!

Very well written and magnificently erotic descriptive opening and a shock ending!! Love to read more please!

mykellmmykellmabout 9 years ago
Thanks for writing

I liked how descriptive the story is.

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