by TooTiredToCare
The good, the bad, the erotic sides of losing one's virginity. Thanks for sharing this honest account of your first time!
You write with an emotional intelligence that brings an added edge to your submissive depravity. I enjoy your writing tremendously. Very hot. Very arousing.
Well I liked it and thought it was a great first story for this site and hopefully we will see more storys from you.
Good story, however even if she was willing it was almost as if he raped her.
He was a selfish little prick that needs his ass kicked.
I enjoyed your writing. Some of the extra information such as the room and music as well as the rouge being put over his parents add to this story. They allow a reader to take their thinking to similar life experiences.
First person is a tough writing style. This might have been more interesting as a third person.
Keep writing.