All Comments on 'Will She Accept the Challenge Ch. 02'

by NewNaughtyWriter

Sort by:
  • 19 Comments
MogjMogjalmost 13 years ago

Great story - love the tension you are building up, can't wait for the next installment

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
wow

the tension builds... can't wait for the next installment!

teaseloverteaseloverover 12 years ago
Excellent

On tenterhooks here, great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
oooooohhh

Great story, can't wait for the next instalment. well written as well.

MogjMogjover 12 years ago
We are still waiting

still waiting for the next chapter - you've left us hanging just like your wife :)

DaflingerDaflingerabout 11 years ago
again

great imagination and building of suspense. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
excellent story...

plz continue and write more of this type

julie_oregonjulie_oregonover 10 years ago
Please continue this hot story

You have built up the wife's—and our—anticipation. Please don't keep us hanging, but continue this series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
FTDS

No, not floral delivery.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great build up!

I really enjoyed this, please finish it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Never continue

This unrealistic, silly junk. Didn't like either of them. Maybe they fell off the page? I can only hope. A waste of time to read.

lgcelsielgcelsieabout 9 years ago

These two stories need a couple of sequels. Where are they?

maddictmaddictover 8 years ago
Perspective....

No harm will come to you, don't women hold there emotional side equal to the physical side, you are on lucky suckuh that see is turned on by this.

A blindfold in the bedroom was as far as we can get, then I opend the door...... What are you doing ? .........

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerover 6 years ago
Really?

Six years and you haven't finished the story yet? Twelve lashes with a wet noodle for you.

Seriously--this is why I hate multiple chapter stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Another Dead End

Another broken story. This is why I seldom read the first chapter or two of a series.

fantsymanfantsymanover 4 years ago
Brilliant

I was really enjoying this I look forward to the rest of the story

julie_oregonjulie_oregonabout 3 years ago

Again, please continue this hot story

I must have first discovered this series over 7 years ago, and enjoyed it very much, asking for a continuation. You have built up the wife's—and our—anticipation. Again, please don't keep us hanging, but continue this series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Too bad this is a broken, unfinished story. There was a lot of potential here for so many adventures for both of them. There may be some hope to finish the story as I have read some that have gone on for almost 10 years before taking up the next chapters. Such a hot buildup. It is a waste of creative writing talent.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Looking forward to Ch03

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous