All Comments on 'Willing Ch. 07'

Be sure to stick around for Chapter 8, the Conclusion to our story. And please don't forget to rate this story (hopefully, a 5!)

"She had ME fooled. And it was VERY enjoyable."

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Really beautyful story, or dare I say "making of ..."? A little too much family-stuff for my taste, but never mind. The descricptions of the ladies' emotions are so sweet, that it really touched me.

I am very glad that you are back as an author here. Since I read "Ugly duckling" (and believe me, I did want to kill your mother, or the heroine's mother - don't know, how that story occurred to you - for betraying the little girl) I alway remembered you as one of the most interesting and heart-touching authors of lesbian erotica.

(And sorry if I expresses myself in a funny way as English is not my first language. But I hope you get what I mean.)

haha... i like the way you wove yourself into this! and messed with the reader's mind with the beach story (pulling the reader out of one story, into another). fabulous!! :-)