All Comments on 'Willing Prey'

A very well written and beautiful story

This story couldn't have been a better example of a story of an upstanding faithful, until now, and moral woman being seduced and fucked by a butch dyke. And guess what? the upstanding moral woman is now a dyke as well! The butch dyke has another conquest under her belt. Good for her. And another slut dyke bitch writer strikes again. I guess she must hate men so much. Oh well I wasted a few moments read the story.

I would have loved to see Lisa as the bait, entrapment, and Shelly as the John and then Shelly would have been busted out of the police department. Everyone needs to be taken down a notch or two and that goes for cops.

Loved your story Carol and could feel the wettness from here. We're both glad you are back after 6 years. Keep writing.

Pretty sure it's physically impossible for it to be actual adultery when with another woman. And don't point fingers until you've been in that kind of situation, moron. As for the story, good job!

How would it not adultery because it was with another woman?

I admit I am not comfortable with cheating,(regardless of who it is with.) I am even less comfy with living a lie. Did that waaay to many years.

As a fan of erotic fiction however...taboo topics are hawt as hell to read!

I liked the story!

sex between a woman who was married and a person other than her spouse

That is considered to be adultery. Adultery applies to either married partner when they have sex with anyone else, same sex or opposite sex does not matter legally.

Please write more.

Very good story. Nice build up. Good characters. Thanks

I loved it ;-p

So realistic -- thank you!

I cast this movie…Charlize Theron as Shelly and Lucy Hale as Lisa.

More chapters, please.

A nit boring because there is no inner struggle, the butch femme just needed to be persistant in talking her in, what she on an emotional level wanted. So: good story, but maye it could describe more inner conflicts or restrictions.

A beautiful story of femme seduction by butch. The femme just needed a little push to release her true desires! I love it!