All Comments on 'Windswept Ch. 04'

how does a demon get into heaven or a traitor to heaven not get discovered?

This is getting more and more interesting. Now that all the players including Harem appear to all be in Heaven. I figure Harem getting in has something to do w/him being a fallen "angel". Or it could be Michael has chosen the old adage of keep your friends close and your enemies closer. Whatever the reason it certainly adds to the storyline. I look forward to chapter 5.

This is getting better and better, can't wait to see what happens next.

At first, I was dubious about this story, but it's grown on me. One thing I'd say to help improve your writing is to show what the characters feel and do instead of just saying it. Help the reader experience the story as if they're a part of it. Good job, though. I can't wait to read more. (: