by AngelPoet
and I liked the twist at the end. I thought you had a great plot and wrote it very well. Thank you.
Your story was quite intriguing and paced perfectly. If you write poetry, then you have a grasp for rhythm. This was the first of your stories I've read and will now have to read from the very beginning! For now, lets hope the Cubs can win a World Series (after all, my Red Sox finally did!!!!)!!!!!!!!!!!
A great story. I was a bit disappointed that Alex is married, though. However, It is realistic and I hope that Justine won't get hurt. But there's Mr. Shy IT Guy, who could be just the thing for her. Please continue the story - soon.