by steveh11
This story started out with great promise. Unfortunately for me, the main characters have become less interesting with each passing chapter. Marianne is superficial, the male lead seems aimless and just goes along with whatever Marianne says (a future cuckold in the making?), the twin sister is colorless and dull, and now we learn the ex-girlfriend is a party girl and does drugs. BORING!
<br><br>It's 60's retro - sex, drugs, rock 'n roll, man. But they did it much better in the 60's than this aimless ragtag group does. At this point, I don't care if they all end up in a group shag, mom and dad included. I'd suggest just wrapping up the story, however badly it's going to end for all concerned.