All Comments on 'Winter Love'

You make sparks fly in a cold climate. What is up for tomorrow?? More crabs, I'm sure.

Really nice atmosphere, and I could so feel their slight touching as they looked out to the sea. Best part. Oh, and I love your profile nick, Rayne.

I totally put myself there. That was great cant wait to see where you take us next.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Thank You,

Beautiful story told without cliches. Please continue to write...and secretly returning something passed on from a third party(smile).

And lovely... cannot wait for your next submission!

This was a very well written story. It was sensual and highly erotic. You have a gift for dialogue as well. You are off to a fantastic start. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Truly amazing first effort. So well written with such a sensual quality. I felt I was in the room, feeling the warmth of the fireplace, looking out into the ocean, feeling them touch,carress, explore each other.

I can't wait until your next story is approved. Congratulations! You got a 5 from me.

Your writing leaves me breathless. I must admit that i will take the thought of this story to bed with me tonight.

Janice