by O2
Your writing leaves me breathless. I must admit that i will take the thought of this story to bed with me tonight.
Janice
Truly amazing first effort. So well written with such a sensual quality. I felt I was in the room, feeling the warmth of the fireplace, looking out into the ocean, feeling them touch,carress, explore each other.
I can't wait until your next story is approved. Congratulations! You got a 5 from me.
This was a very well written story. It was sensual and highly erotic. You have a gift for dialogue as well. You are off to a fantastic start. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Thank You,
Beautiful story told without cliches. Please continue to write...and secretly returning something passed on from a third party(smile).
I totally put myself there. That was great cant wait to see where you take us next.
Really nice atmosphere, and I could so feel their slight touching as they looked out to the sea. Best part. Oh, and I love your profile nick, Rayne.
You make sparks fly in a cold climate. What is up for tomorrow?? More crabs, I'm sure.