All Comments on 'Within Amie Ch. 04'

but WAAAAAY to short!!!!!

Yes lol. It is a bit shorter than the usual but I have to separate them into two different chapters. Hehe. Thanks for VOTING and COMMENTING!!

More, more, more!!!

Way to go Amie!! Grant it there would have been nothing wrong with ripping off Rob's arms and slapping him with them but I do agree that it may have been just a smig harsh. It was for the best because I really didn't think that Rob would have been able to stand the heat(pun intended)as where Edmund would embrace it. Great work.