All Comments on 'Without Words'

well written... so descriptive.... so real. Well done.

very good build up to a crescendo...so simple-almost sparingly so but well written and gives a real feeling of that frantic initial encounter

nicely done

your talent is overwhelming; i'm so jealous!

fantasticly descriptive piece.

I've been meaning to read for a while, tonight I finally did.

It builds so beautifully, you can almost breathe it in, taste it.

I loved it, I look forward to the next one.

Short and complete, powerfully erotic. I really enjoyed it.