All Comments on 'Without Words'

by whambam

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avrgblkgrlavrgblkgrlalmost 13 years ago
Nice...

Short and complete, powerfully erotic. I really enjoyed it.

Lady_FionaLady_Fionaover 13 years ago
Oh goodness

I've been meaning to read for a while, tonight I finally did.

It builds so beautifully, you can almost breathe it in, taste it.

I loved it, I look forward to the next one.

geronimo_applebygeronimo_applebyover 13 years ago
I hate you!

your talent is overwhelming; i'm so jealous!

fantasticly descriptive piece.

janeyljaneylover 13 years ago
lovely...

very good build up to a crescendo...so simple-almost sparingly so but well written and gives a real feeling of that frantic initial encounter

nicely done

newbiebabenewbiebabeover 13 years ago
Very nice...

well written... so descriptive.... so real. Well done.

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