by Anitole
Very well done. Good plot and character development, mildly erotic but engrossing. Needs grammar and spelling editing.
Pretty short but excellent that none of the typical werewolf cliches happen so far and the story is rather smooth.
I've been wanting to write a werewolf novel for some time... However, this remains, for now, at least, on the back burner. If you want to try and write a chain story...by all means, take it up.
I hope this is the first chapter of many. I liked the story.