All Comments on 'Wolf's Pet Ch. 33'

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katgoddess1katgoddess1about 12 years ago
We are almost there

Almost to the Wolf moon. The suspense is killing me!

EllieLavenEllieLavenabout 12 years ago
Fantastic!

Can't wait to find out who Joszef's mate is! Love this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
next chapter please

you got me to cry and i can't wait for ch 34 and to see who is Jószef mate!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Longtime please

Can you please make the chapters longer than two pages? I didn't mind earlier on in the series but now I'm over it it's very annoying to only read two pages when your story is this great

Patrolin_AusPatrolin_Ausabout 12 years ago
Dammit....

You made me cry. I felt like I was really there.

hakdrakkenhakdrakkenabout 12 years ago
Best yet, and, some of you are crazy

That really was a very emotional chapter. Sorrowful lows and extreme hope, all blended expertly. I think it was the best one yet. Some authors are best in the planning scenes, some in the battles, some with the sex. You seem to be a master of character- and emotional-exploration.

To the people who say, “your stories are so wonderful, please make the chapters longer,” I say, “you're nuts! Stop trying to mess with perfection and the author’s creative process.”

MizTMizTabout 12 years ago
Love and Loss and Love

With the fear of the unknown the newly mated and those who will mate begin to show signs of that fear. But through the love of their mate or future mate these women have concurred their fears. So we see the love and the loss. The loss of those who gave their lives for their pack. That you showed a female who's loss was almost to much for her only added to the intensity of those losses. But still to come is the Wolf Moon mating where the love is again center stage. Whether mated long ago, recently or to mate that night, it is truly about the love.

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxabout 12 years ago
Wow

I wish I was there with them. As deep as I am in this story, I mourn for them.

Great Job!

foxxylady5foxxylady5about 12 years ago
wolf,s pet

i feel like im there ive loved every chapter and i keep looking for the next everyday love this so much keep it coming

EuphoriaSlam69EuphoriaSlam69about 12 years ago
Oh My Luna!

lilgirlsix - this series is frickin AMAZE-balls! There's not one character I don't like. I'm addicted and obsessed! Thanks for that! Love it so much! More more more more more more more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Next!!

oh please, I read tooo fast! this was just a taste for what's next! oh! loved it!!! ;)

sexy_bosoxgirlsexy_bosoxgirlabout 12 years ago
slick girl......

wow you really know how to end a chapter....you go girl.....you have a way of leaving them wanting more....can't wait for the next chapter.....

QueenbiggumzQueenbiggumzabout 12 years ago
YEAHY!!!!!

another splendid chapter, LOVED IT. feels like i'm part of the pack. more matings to come the wolf moons is here can't wait for the next chapter. keep us wanting more. SMILES..,

keepit going don't want it to end. as always LIVE LARGE LIVE FREE!

LadySilverNovaLadySilverNovaabout 12 years ago
Gah....

I'm having a love/hate relationship with your cliffhangers. I hate having to wait for that next bit of story, but I love how skilled you are at placing them.

Full moon & matings are almost here, can barely wait!

catman71catman71about 12 years ago
top notch as normal

i like the pacing , the little side things like carr and the owl( and i think you could have a a little thing there) now to see who jozefs mate is, and why do i think the Europeanr council is going to start a fight

oneboobeeoneboobeealmost 12 years ago

This is so good!!!! I love your writing.

Archangel_MArchangel_Malmost 12 years ago
Uh-oh

Happy as I am for Jószef, this really isn't the right moment... :P

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