All Comments on 'Woman of the House'

Careful on the anachronisms. None here, but you didn't write any opportunity for any either. But if this becomes a series, as it seems it's going to, they may crop up.

But this was a fine start, a good setting for what could be a fun multi-session romp!

DIdnt read past the first paragrapgh... not because it was bad just because im fuckin tired ill check it out in the morning... seems like it could go well in like a civil war era setting though

Well written and very earthy. It is a good read and I'd like to read more. . .

the "twanginess" of Twain-like dialogue doesn't contribute anything positive to the tale.

Did you forget, this should have been an incest story, not stepfather and stepbrothers story. It was well written, and a very good read. Thanks..........LAROC

now i/m anxious

Seems as if she will be well fucked by all three of the men of the house.

I wonder how they will tell whose baby she will have, or if they will even care.

Hope to see more soon.

Thanks for the read...

Nicely intoduced as the start of a story with several segments. Be nice to see the rest.

I'm loving it, off to the next chapter now. Thanks