All Comments on 'Wonderland Ch. 02'

Well thought and well executed, I look forward to seeing whats next.

So it is going to be a mate relationship. Interesting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Sounds like the beginnings of a Tempestous relationship. What confusion in ch1.

slow , entertaining story. you are taking a nice slow path i think, an i do beleive that stories that take time to open out are good, they invest the reader in taking time to get to know characters and the problems they face, and i do hope we. along with talon find the other of his kind, and find out if the other three races are still around, and in what form

and when do we get chapter three? ;-)

loved this update.

so different from all the other nonhuman stories on here and I can't wait to see how being his mate may help her to be stronger

I like it. For some reason, I had never thought of gargoyles as reptilian but it seems so obvious and natural the way you've written it.

I'd like to know more about Tempest. You've given us a good taste of her background and I'm looking forward to finding out what kind of person she is. I'm also looking forward to learning more about Talon's kind and his world/time.

Can't wait to watch the story and their relationship develop.

I have to agree with the earlier comment. Up to this point, gender has been irrelevant.to what is an excellent story so far.

So far this is a pretty good non human story! And the fact that involes Gargolyes etc is even better!! Will we see Talon use any of his magic?? And I was thinking...if any of the other clans are still around would they still be in their forms, or evolved into some kind of human form?? I must read on to find out!

All right, I'm intrigued. You got me.

Are you telling that by smell they find the one to be their mate?

A little too much about instincts but not feeling don't you think? Or is it what they need for a start?