All Comments on 'Work Mates And Maybe More?'

by Mog80

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Oh, damn, girl! That one of the hottest stories I have ever read on Literotica! I will definitely be having a good time with myself later.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Write something else,.please

I loved it. It's the only one you've written though. I want more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story!

Short, but very good story. I especially like how you introduced the characters, and worked them closer together.

lawteyfllawteyflalmost 13 years ago
Nice

Keep it up! You are very good.

Mog80Mog80almost 13 years agoAuthor
thanks :-)

Thanks for the feedback. This is my first story, so appreciate all constructive feedback!

VirginiawildVirginiawildalmost 13 years ago

Lovely story. ...Sexy, too. It could use more dialogue.

kucooziekucooziealmost 13 years ago
Great little encounter

Very vivid and easy to imagine--extremely hot!

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