All Comments on 'Working Hard for Her Job Ch. 02'

Good story, but you need to watch out. you seemed to change "Steve"'s name to "Dave" a couple of times.

balls, I thought I got them all! thanks for pointing that out!

Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter; I think I may have new favorite series to follow.

Good story and I wish it would continue.

Two things:

1 The Dave / Steve name swap, which you addressed.

2 Is Peeta an Native American Indian like in the first chapter or an Asian like in this chapter? (E.G. Her Indian heritage... / ...her throbbing Asian...)

...in chapter 1 he was Mr. Johnson and in chapter 2 he's Mr. Gascombe!

Unlike ffemt53, I never took Peeta to be anything but an Indian from Asia. Didn't see where he got American Indian from.

I, too, wouldn't mind a chapter 3, with just Peeta and Steve.

IF YOU AREN'T OLD ENOUGH TO READ BETWEEN THE LINES OF A STORY, AND ENJOY IT FOR WHAT IS...YOU SHOULDN'T BE ON HERE READING THEM...

THIS IS ONE HOT STORY, AND I FOR ONE, WOULD ENJOY MORE OF IT...!

To the comments before Indians are very much Asian

You have to keep your train of thought. A few times you mention Dave rather than Steve.

This needs more chapters.

Super story everybody involved are happy and nobody was forced in antique this is a super story maybe it can continue on with some other ways it is great