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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
A WOW of a story

A really good read! Hot, romantic, and provocative, it kept me interested and surprised me at the end. Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Ambiguity

Maybe a little more ambiguity about them being married to each other. Couch the language when she is faking surprise at him being married?

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