All Comments on 'Working Lunch'

by RedKirsten

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wrong

Used a localize ism not the term known to the world. The mistake is "suspender belt" which more widely known is 'garter belt' such little errors reduce the number who will read any future stories by the author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Re: wrong

If you count global as the US then I guess your comment is valid.

ShadowsucksShadowsucksalmost 9 years ago
Somebody let stupid loose in the comments.

It embarrasses me how ignorant and oblivious Americans are to the rest of the world. Wasn't born and raised in the states but have lived here most of my life. It's a shame that so many Americans still believe the US is the center of the universe.

Your story is brilliant and sexy, first rate stuff. Thank you.

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