All Comments on 'Working the Cubicles Ch. 01'

enjoyed your writing, but maybe you should try not to overphrase (??), just get to the point w/o so many words...

keep it up! had fun reading it and really want to hear more about Rachel

I really enjoyed it! More please!

I want to be her . Please use me and allow others to use and humiliate me. Thank you sir.

I really enjoyed this and can't wait to read more.

I like the wit a lot and the style of the prose. The sexy bits aren't quite my style but they don't actually affect how much I liked the story.

this is exactly my kind of story, and it's written really well. can't wait for chapter 2!

perfect

Loving this. Look forward to it continuing.

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I am shocked! Shocked I say! That this happens in corporate world... And yet never happened to me.

Love your writing, they way you convey the inner dialogue is so natural sounding. Sexy good fun fantasy!