by amberbmaid
i hope you will be publishing the next year soon. I envy him so much. would give anything to be in his place
It simply doesn't seem to be in the realm of plausibility that he would agree to a one year term with such one-sided rules. And that makes the story unbelievable.
Maybe it's time for you to come clean with your desires. You read 2 amberbmaid stories in one day and dis them both. Why bother reading a second? He's supposed to just go back to average Joe? Boring.
taking the silly cage and shoving it up her ass as your reply? That way she would know you regained a little of your self-respect and wasn't going to accept a manipulative, abusive bitch use you.
When he left her at the airport? And never called or saw her again? Like the idiot she was? Seems fitting. She's a manipulative user. Why would he stay with her? Why would any man stay with her. Just too ridiculous a premise . This was total garbage, even for fiction.
In my fantasy i wish I was that guy, but as the old saying goes, somethings are best left as a fantasy.
Would have laughed at her the second she started and asked her what universe did she live in?