All Comments on 'Worth Waiting'

by julybear7

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EMiamiRiverRatEMiamiRiverRatabout 10 years ago
Another fine story from JB

I don't know how I missed this one for so long, but I found it and loved it; a bit like your characters and the ending. I wish...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Contrived

Needed better plot development. Without a good reason given for the whole break-in/attack drama, it made the story line seem forced and far-fetched.

gravyruggravyrugover 11 years ago
Nice

I think it could have used a slower pace, with a little more of them getting to know one another, but the plot and characterization were very good.

chytownchytownover 11 years ago
Good Read****

Another well written story thanks for sharing.

JonATaylorJonATaylorover 11 years ago
Good Story, Half Done

You write well, good flow and easy to follow. Your characters are alive (real) and interesting. There must be a chapter two. Loose ends and half told thoughts. Looking forward.

ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosover 11 years ago
Nicely done!

I must admit though that "mink" is a new one on me.

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