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Again I worked myself in and out picking up the pace as things got easier for her. Soon she brought her feet to my ass and tried to push me in harder. I got the hint and started to piston in and out.
I was rewarded with grunts of satisfaction and her clawing at my back. The entire time she never let go of my shoulders. She held me in a tight embrace. Becky came once more. She clenched down around my embedded cock and I couldn't hold out any longer. I forced myself hard into her and shot several strong jets of cum into her body. The lights blacked out for me.
I rolled off of her and she gave a disappointed groan.
I couldn't move. I laid on my back trying to regain my senses.
She groped around and found her underwear and put them on.
We slid under the covers looking for a safe place to lie but the wet spots were everywhere. We ended up hugging close on the edge of the bed. I held her tight and we kissed lightly for a few minutes.
Letting out a sigh, I thought to myself, "She's finally mine."
Becky was staring into my eyes; she was reading my mind again. She just smiled and snuggled tighter into my chest.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 5 years agoExcellent writing, great characters as usual!
I'm hoping for more chapters in this story.
Thanks again!
Chief3Blanketover 7 years agoDefinitely need chapter two. The way this is written at the end the reader is left hanging wondering what happened.
Tw0Cr0wsalmost 9 years agoMore than three years later, and nothing added to this.
Forgotten? Or abandoned?
You have even put up a story in the last few months.
DOC226about 11 years agoThat was the sweetest and erotic story I have read lately. Please add another chapter.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoyou have so many grammatical errors, especially words just left out, and phrases that don't fit the logic of a sentence, i just gave up.
quit talking about getting an editor and actually get one.
your "seducing the neighbor'S daughter" is a great story with fanastic dialogue.
wrc264almost 12 years agoGreat story, just too short, especially at the end. Just one sex scene.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoRead both of your stories and they are light, fresh and highly entertaining. You do need an editor or else you need to take more time proofing. I'd suggest finding someone to check your work because you definitely have a skill for developing the story line and fine editing would be a waste of your talent. One of my favorites. More, please!
PoissonSurLaLuneabout 12 years agoAnonymous (if that is his real name) is right about the little things jerking readers out of the flow of your otherwise very god story. Literotica has some great volunteer editors that have helped me a lot with the minor technical bits and I really recommend you try the service. But like I said, it's a really cute, fun story ^-^
Anonymousabout 12 years agobut, damn, I wish writers like you would learn to proof read through your story just ONE time, at least. I quit counting, but I think you had, at the very least, twenty-five errors in omitted words, dropped articles (a, an, the), change of tense from past to present, simply by leaving off the letters "ed" on the ends of verbs, and a couple of times not ending an adverb with the necessary "ly"! I hope you are not one of those idiots who says, "I write here for my own pleasure". If that is the case, then why put it on here. As said above, just ONE proofing will improve this story about 70%, just because it keeps any half-way educated reader from having to constantly pause and correct what is being read. And if Literotica would like to put this short diatribe in their "How To" section, I would be perfectly willing to sign it for publishing. Anyway, its a good story.
