All Comments on 'Wretched'

I liked the story and the concept but i think you should consider going over the story again and trying to make it longer. this story has great potential, but the way it abruptly finished makes it feel like you got bored with it. give it another chance. you have the makings of a great story here.

First you say that human-tyrgli children are biologically impossible, then you predict a child coming out of the union of slave and mistress. Which is it? I mean, it makes more sense that they wouldn't be able to conceive, as tyrgli are an alien species.