by hotpup
the best stories start with a buildup, tell us how this started, just starting off with everyone already having sex is no fun, maybe u can have the brother and sister having sex and then they bring their mom in or start off with how the brother and sister started......a begining would make this story a lot better
it was the best i ever read in incest .timing of peneteration & eating of pussies were perfect.it gave me a real pleasure
Having today read the three parts in their correct order, I have to say how much I enjoyed the story. A clever plot with likeable characters but you do tend to rush things. However, all together a fine effort. Keep up the good work.
As for the comments of "Anonymous in USA of 11/9/04" - he obviously didn't bother to read this story since answers to all his questions were available in the two earlier parts as referenced in Lines 3 & 4 of the current part.
Regards, Pete.
loved the story from start to finish.i especially loved part three.Had me wishing i could be part of the familys fuckfest.
loved the story from start to finish.i especially loved part three.Had me wishing i could be part of the familys fuckfest.
loved the story from start to finish.i especially loved part three.Had me wishing i could be part of the familys fuckfest.