All Comments on 'Yes, Again Ch. 03'

by parawa

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Poetry. .... you have class and style in your writings

jhollanderjhollanderover 9 years ago
Beautiful

As the last commenter said, your writing reads like poetry, capturing a moment in time where through your excellent descriptions, the reader can almost feel their own senses light up. The feel of the clips, the taste of their fluids on his cock...it's all quite potent. They clearly have a long and deep history, and I look forward to more pieces of their past being revealed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Simply Wonderful!

Your writing is simple, in the most beautiful way, and you paint a picture very well. As everyone else has said, it reads like poetry! I am curious to find out more about our couple here, as it is quite obvious they have a lot of love and trust with one another. Can't wait for your next update!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Wow

Your story is incredibly vivid and enthralling, it pulls the reader in. Fascinating levels of kink too 😉

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