All Comments on 'You Can Get What You Want'

by cedarbus

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MadelynWMadelynWabout 17 years ago
More tension, please

Take time to build up tension. Tension is like foreplay. Without tension, there's no sense of how deeply the characters desire each other, so there's little release when the sex gets going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
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amazing :) so romantic

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