All Comments on 'You Can't Do That! Ch. 02'

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kalash777kalash7774 months ago

I enjoyed it - thanks! And keep writing.

kalash777kalash7774 months ago

Actually, it's a sad story: the guy got cheated twice and ends up with the same cheater. How sadder could it be? It's clear that the wife has serious mental issues but they both love each other, hence, the drama. It's good that it's just a piece of fiction, otherwise, it'd break my heart.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Thanks, still a great story! I really like your stories! DerMtMan

Thor2530Thor25303 months ago

Very good. Thank you.

greenbeardlkgreenbeardlkabout 1 month ago

piss poor ending. 1*.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

what can u do, thats the meaning of love. if u love a person more than hate thats what happen. you move on.

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShades19 days ago

Thanks for your writing.

NitpicNitpic15 days ago
Decent

Decent story.Me I think he was a fool for marrying her in the first place.After she walked out,he should have burnt her and the doctor Anne not given her half.

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