All Comments on 'You Enchant Me Ch. 04'

OMG this is so hot... the long wait is so worth it.. you tease and tease and tease the readers, It was brilliantly written and the build up was amazing.. hoping this is not the last installment.. great job

You write so well. Charming, witty with a great since of humor! I love the fact that you don't recap the past 1000 times. Had me hooked and never got boring. The sassy banter between the two characters adds extra heat. I miss that the most in a lot of stories here. Keep up the excellent work with explaining the emotions within your characters. Sweetly HOT!

I love this story absoletulely wonderful! Will there be more

This was just so sexy - I love how playful and eager they are with each other. I really look forward to reading more about them and their relationship.

I love that each new segment improves on the story & development of these two. Fun banter & some good droplets of drama. Hope you continue this story soon.

The playfulness is great, and I want to know more about who these women are.

*Grins* This chapter was excellent. As were the others but I loved this one.

Much love,

Your Friendly Neighbourhood Turtle

Just wow.

The details, the description, was truly remarkable. I have no idea if there will be a 5th or 6th part, but it would be hard to beat this segment of the story. Keep going...

I'm very thankful for all of your feedback, and all those compliments to boot! Very glad you all enjoyed the story- not sure if there will be an update on these two for a long while though... (We'll just have to wait and see!)

Enjoyable!

Just makes me want more.

SB

Awesome story looking forward to more

I really loved this one, and would really love to read more of it...

Just sayin'.

I love your stories. I'd love to hear more from the girls too, but if you have other stories to work on then that's fine. Just give me more of your wonderful, teasing writings!

Love love love, this story. HeartnSole, please continue

A very enjoyable story.