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Click hereShe saw it and started backing away. "Me? You're the one fucking your step-sister!"
"Exactly!" he barked. "Step-sister. Not related. Not blood. Not wrong! So what is yourfuckingproblem!"
He backed her up against the wood siding of the house and hit it with his hands, trapping her between his arms. They were under the overhang of the porch, in the shadows. He hung over her, inches away, breathing hard, his eyes burning through her retinas. Her eyes shifted from his.
He remembered earlier thinking how confident she was. He didn't think that anymore.
"Chris, you're scaring me," she said quietly.
"I don't give afuck!" Chris literally felt himself seething with hatred for this girl. A hot vein of iron ran through his arms as he strained against the side of the house. Maybe if he pushed hard enough, he could tear down the goddamn wall. "I don't give two shits how scared you are, Becky. You just cost me the most perfect in my life."
She seemed to wince at this but recovered quickly. "You did that when you let me go down on you."
She was right. He knew it. He'd fucked up. And now he was looking for a way to deflect the blame from himself. His psyche wasn't ready to accept that responsibility. He clenched his jaw and there was a moment of silence between them. She had to look away again.
"What's going on, Beck?" he asked, more controlled. But there was still an edge to his voice. "You said it was sex. You said it wasn't even sex, it was nothing."
"I didn't say it was nothing," she bit back quickly. "I never said that."
"You need to hear one thing very clearly," he said. "What we did has now become the biggest mistake I've ever made. Because I love her." And as he said it, he at last realized it was true. "Get your fucking jealousy under control. It might be with the rest of your clothes in Simon's room."
Becky's eyes shot up to his suddenly, and that's when she remembered. She'd been so shocked when she saw the two of them in the hot tub that she'd forgotten she was wearing Simon's shirt. "Chris, it's not.." Her eyes started to water and she looked away.
"No!" Chris punched the wall, scaring her back to his eyes. "Not in front of me," he growled. And with considerable effort, he was finally able to let go of the wall, stepping away from her and going back inside.
Very unsatisfying ending. I see this part was written in 2006 so no chance of a true ending after all this time. It's sad that this is happening all too often here. I have read several series only to come to the last page of the last submission to find a cliff hanger that then never gets resolved. Maybe it would be better for authors to hold their work and submit it when completed? It would save a lot of reader frustration.
MADDOGINTEXAS, what conclusion? I see nothing after chapter 6, the lack of ending dropped it from 4 or 5, down to 1 or 2.
Well, I DO see there is a conclusion chapter to this...and I am off to read it!!
Before I do, tho'...I still love this story, the emotion and love between Laura and Chris is palpable...now we will see how they can handle a little intrusion by the bitch Rebecca...she really let both her "friends"have it with that little comment.
Becky led Chris on...her comment about 'sex for the joy of sex' or whatever...we could see the duplicity of her mind even as we read it...and while she was gonna bang Simon...
**5** Stars...again, I love the story...hope the 'conclusion' is going to be satisfactory, and NOT disappointing...
Unfortunately, we need writers in the erotic side of adult relationships who finish the work. It's been so long but you have to wonder what happened to the author... I like the details of life the person included. Another writer could read this story and bridge in missing pieces plus finish it. This one deserves a proper conclusion. Heck, it could carry on in several more chapters.
Don't like the way it ended. I thought they made a perfect couple and I loved him been together.
Laura contains a surprise for both herself and her brother. She will discover she is pregnant. That will motivate her to reconcile with him but she will demand some pretty inflexible ground rules.
How can an author bring a story along so good and then leave the reader hanging. It is so wrong not to finish this story. This was a 5 star story until this end leaving the reader hanging. 3 stars
The end of chapter 6 ruined the story for me and dropped it from 4 star to a single star. If it were possible to give it a lower grade I would. It's pretty obvious that you won't fix your story with a 7th chapter so I'm done reading your junk.
Great story! Well written!! Know it's been quite some time, but really hoping you get around to finishing this...
You have me sucked in . I have to read more. Left me with so many questions.dont let it end like that
I was hoping for so much more in the Ending ... I liked most of the Story but the Ending I hated ..