All Comments on 'Young Love'

very enjoyable tale can not wait to read more

This was awsome we gotta kno his reaction to triplets pleeeessssseeeee!!!!!!!!!

I have to admit that I have a special place in my heart for Kyra and Malcolm, and I'm glad you told their story. There is such a sweetness and innocence to them, but underneath it was clear that there was an intense love between the two of them.

another awesome story , cant wait to read more about this group :)

Thank you all for reading this story. As I said at the end, this couple is very special to me. Their love for each other grew stronger because of their bond from when they were younger. At first, I started not to write it, but some readers asked and I agreed that it needed to be written. I am so happy it was so well received.

Thank you for reading it, and I truly hope you were pleased.

IR2R

Very sweet and loaded with that uncertainty and not trusting yourself of young/ new love. I loved it!

I understand that u wanted this to be a one story to wrap up malcom n kyra story but tooo me it was wayyyyyu to rushed ..... somewhere on the middle page i goT lost

I for one thought it was beautiful. I can relate to the let's be friends first idea, as my wife of 15 years and I started out just like that. I guess you can't keep true love hidden long can you? I'm sorry that you plan on making this a one time thing but there's more you can do here. Way to go IR2R.

NO WAY CAN THIS STORY BE JUST A ONE INSTALLMENT. WE NEED MORE FROM THE YOUNG COUPLE. U CAN GO BACK AND REVAMP THE COLLEGE YEARS, THE FIRST YEARS OF MARRIAGE, ETC. THERE'S ALOT THAT CAN STILL BE WRITTEN ABOUT THEM WHILE ADDING IN THE TRIPLETT'S BIRTH, , FAMILY GATHERINGS AND ETC. AT LEAST 3 MORE CHAPTERS. AS A MATTER OF FACT EACH OF THE CHARACTERS CAN HAVE A FOUR CHAPTER STAND ALONG INSTALLMENT WHILE STILL INCLUDING FAMILY ACTIVITIES ALL AT THE SAME TIME. BUT THAT IS A HELL OF ALOT OF WRITING. EVEN MATT AND GINA CAN HAVE A COUPLE OF CHAPTHER WHILE STAYING UNDER THE MAIN STORY LINE. ENJOYED IT FULLY. LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER ON THE VAMPS.

Simply sweet.

I love it! Short, sweet and to the point. As other stories surrounding other characters unfold, Kyra and Malcolm can contribute as a mated pair to the story line. I don't see this as a ending only as a beginning. This series has so many options yet to come. Looking forward to your updates.

I was so happy it had a happy ending . Abeautiful story

Stephen J