All Comments on 'Your Choice'

Did you choose not to use quotation marks on purpose? Did you think it was edgy?

Or do you simply not know how to write?

Great story. Can hardly wait to see what happens after her date

I'd like to read 9 more chapters of this hot, tortuous denial story.

Fantastic looking forward to more

I know I’ve read this before - what kind of pathetic loser has to copy a story and then post it as his own. How sad your life must be.

Why leave us hanging? Why not have her bring the date back and fuck her right in front of him? He wants bi sex, maybe this stud can break him in. Breed his tight lubed pussy too.

..even though I don't go for slutty outfits, shaved pussy and the rest, that was just really hot. Perfect timing and somehow captured a moment perfectly. Would be five stars if you would just take a couple of hours to tighten up the writing. Then add some quotation marks and run it through a grammar and spelling checker.

If you can't finish your stories, don't post them. And get an editor. And then get a decent idea for a story because letting her run all over him like she did and staying married to her are so unbelievable that's it's funny. BAH!