by sexrex
Your heroine?---You?---Any reader who gets hard reading this?
This was quality work and I loved every word. Don't let the pea brains tell you any different.
How can you say she's/he's/we're sick when there are people writing about incest, insane BDSM, and such on this site. This is tame compared to some... grow a pair and stop whining.
This was great! Keep it up! I felt like it was my lover and me....very real.
And P.S. fools that are "irritated" or think it is "sick" (why are you here first of all?):
I don't know about guys, but for women that are not used to anal (and sometimes even those who are), it is painful. No matter how hot you are or how ready your lover has made you, the head of a decent sized penis hurts. Usually after that, it feels better, just like in the story. If your lover is awesome (like Bruce and mine) , the pain is incidental and can actually be exciting. It's a great story; not everyone can capture moments like these and write so well about them. If it doesn't hurt you, well then, great! And if you are performing anal and all of your recipients have said that it doesn't hurt, then someone or all are lying or really high.
Certainly not the best I ever read. Yet, it is about a quick anal act and as such, it is well written. We are not into quickies or anal rape and that is how it read to us, so it is nothing to get either of us excited.
i know thats how it CAN be, but anal isnt ALWAYS painful. i am irked.
he sucks his friends dick and then puts it in his butt and tells him to shut his eyes and pretend he's fucking his girlfriend. And when he's all the way in tell him more more more faster faster and rolls back on his back and holds his leggs up and starts taking it in the ass and mouth each thrust. He asks where you want him to cum so he says in the mouth, its nearing so he grabs his own cock and starts jerking till he cums in his own mouth and then his friend cums to in his mouth and he swirls both cum loads at once.
It's quite patent that all the facts are on hand that anal sex is a pretty cool thing to do.