All Comments on 'You're Joking, Right?'

..I read the part where he fucked Gemma, but I didn't realize I was getting a continuation when I started reading this. Well done! That was fuckin' hot! I'll try to generate some constructive criticism, but you don't really need it.

Some of the dialog might have been a bit stiff. Maybe. And the premise was iffy, but sexy. That was totally not punishment.

But the options for the next chapter are fantastic. I'll read the next chapter, no doubt.

fun and funny. I enjoyed it a great deal. Thanks!

wkwimp

S and F.

no way in hell was that revenge it is surpost to be pay back that was a reward i hated because you lied to your readers because there was no revenge