by Ashson
I'm never one to comment on the stories I read but there was something about yours that was just so delightful. Not to mention the fantastic last line. Well done, continue writing xD
I liked the writing of this. It was a decent read. What really sold it to me thought was the fact she wasn't turned to him in the end but instead responded in a normal fashion
Story was hot, ending was precious. It seems that both got what they needed in the end, even if it was not necessarily what they really wanted.
Annie Nonnom