by Ashson
Story was hot, ending was precious. It seems that both got what they needed in the end, even if it was not necessarily what they really wanted.
Annie Nonnom
I liked the writing of this. It was a decent read. What really sold it to me thought was the fact she wasn't turned to him in the end but instead responded in a normal fashion
I'm never one to comment on the stories I read but there was something about yours that was just so delightful. Not to mention the fantastic last line. Well done, continue writing xD