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Anonymousabout 10 years agogood story, but please proofread
There were countless errors like mistypes and leftover words where it looks like you re-wrote something.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoPlot seems good but...
You just need an editor to catch the grammar and other errors.
TempestBainabout 10 years agoContinue
Please hurry with next chapter good story so far but with some grammar errors
Anonymousover 8 years agoGreat story
This is a realy exciting and dramatic story that realy grasped my attention. I cant wait for the next chaper
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