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Click here"The Mouth of My River"
my mouth is thristy for a drink of your sweet nectar
my lips are soft, warm and moist
separate those tender lips of mine with your tongue
light my mouth on fire
penetrate me with your long, rock hard tongue
fill me with the nectar that i'm craving for ...
suck the breath from within me and make, make me cum
then make you way up to my face and kiss me once more
I feel it just needs a little editing. This poem is mentioned in today's New Poem Review in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion Forum. Thank you for sharing!