Pantoum for K.B.

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demure101
demure101
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Thank God I'll see your pretty smile tonight -
the morning is still young, my throat feels tight,
The day lies cold and empty, clear and bright
and speaks of joys to come with its clear light.

I drew the curtains, shook myself awake -
the morning is still young, my throat feels tight,
but springtime sunlight sparkles on the lake
and speaks of joys to come with its clear light.

I feared the icy winter would return;
I drew the curtains, shook myself awake -
the fierce, white daylight makes my eyeballs burn
but springtime sunlight sparkles on the lake.

I feared the icy winter would return;
The day lies cold and empty, clear and bright
the fierce, white daylight makes my eyeballs burn...
Thank God I'll see your pretty smile tonight .

demure101
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DawnJDawnJalmost 11 years ago
Thank God!

A pretty smile covers a multitude of sins! :). Nicely done!

AngelineAngelinealmost 11 years ago
Lovely pantoum

except for the "eyeballs burn" line which sounds a bit clunky to me in an otherwise delicate-feeling poem.