All Comments on 'Glory Hole in Dallas'

very good - looking forward to a continuation

Liked that you waited for the fingers to ask for your cock, That is very important. Then you also gave a good description of the cum stained wall and oh yes the feeling or should I say the need to drive your body tight to the wall as you cum.

Nicely done Dear writer

4yourpleasureiam

Great story. A different perspective for me. Most of the stories that I have read about glory holes, is about sucking cock, not getting your cock sucked.

I really liked the twist at the end.

I love a trick ending. This is a good short story. Keep writing.

You are finding your level Adeyln, the descriptions are great and the tension and expectation build nicely. Love the twist at the end even though I had an inkling it was coming to make her trans was special. You are gonna do just fine girl!

I was hopping that you would write another chapter where the young man learns the added joy of kneeling on the other side of the wall and making a man feel so good.

You don't need a girly to suck your cock till you come in that expert mouth!